Comments about Angie's essay

This essay is very convincing because She describes achievement with a lot of details the product. I like how connect the emotions with the product, describing the context and consumer experience. About the context where the coffee is make, the people who work are very committed with their work.  I think, a can buy this coffee for taste others brands, mainly for its quality. Elma

In my opinion, a main idea need more clarity because I do not write about it but it is a good and emotional description of coffee brand. This essay is convincing because She appeals a child experience and smell and sensational taste. I feel attracted to this product because I love coffee and I share an ideas about quality this brand. Definitely, I will buy this product because She recounts step by step a process for elaboration of coffee in a Santa Elena finca and She invites an audience to visit this place. Sonia