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Friday, October 28, 2016
Kid can do better in the crosswalk
This article is about technology, in specific virtual reality, in this case: virtual street. The article was wrote by Rachel Nuwer and she explain us why this program is important.
One of the most common sources of injuries and fatalities for children around the world, is traffic accidents, when they are crossing the crosswalk. For example in the European Union, children younger than 14 years account for a higher proportion of pedestrian mortalities than any other age group, except the elderly in the U.S.For instance, in Israel, the numbers are particularly chilling, there, kids account for 20% of pedestrian death. Studies have found that youngsters are less adept at identifying road hazards than adults
Anat Meir wanted to pinpoint exactly which behaviors lead to accidents, with the goals of finding way to correct them, to do that without putting anyone in danger, she turned to virtual reality and simulated 18 prototypical streets in Israel and used an eyetracking device to study how 46 adults and children evaluated when it was safe to cross. Intervention do seem to improve crossing success.After that, Meir compared trainee's and control kid's performance in the virtual road crossing task. The children who received safety instructions were significantly better at crossing than the control subject.
In my opinion this article is important, first, because we can be conscious about this problem and how not have vial education and unknown safety instruction affect our children every day and they can death. Second, we can understand how important is give to our children safety instruction or create training program to improve skill to pedestrian when they have to cross.
Childhood reading
The book
by Hisham Matar
Hisham Matar narrate how books impact in his life. He remembered that in his childhood the books were read to him, he spent hours listening and watching at the reader, he could feel every word resonating in his head, in his house were a lot of books but he doesn't know why in his house were not books for kids.
He read a lot of books in his youth, he felt very passionate about it. come books he encountered at the wrong moment, and plenty of others that still light up rooms inside him. the book that has affected him most was "One thousand and One Nights" the mischievous and brilliant writings of al-Jahiz. He came across when he was ten or eleven years. His father read to him that book, but he was fascinated with it because it has the ability to capture such fluid and vague adjustments. He remembered how his father read it out loud and felt the effects of the words reverberate around the room.
Syria's Climate Refugees
Dates of Magazine
Scientific American
March 2016, number 3, volume 314
Pages 52-55
Writer John Wendle
Summary
An article was writer by John Wendle. The article count story of Kemal Ali, a farmer of Syria's, He and many farmers migrant to Greek island of Lesbos and other places because a drought was increase and they could not found an agriculture work or any work. The drought was being exacerbated by climate change and bad government policies, has forced than a million farmers Syria's to moved to overcrowded cities. An effects of drought is compare with a disaster of civil war. The war had originated died, fear, refugees, unemployed and famine, the drought too. The article include references about research of damage of climate change.
Personal Opinion
This article is very interesting because explain about a drought and a consequences in a farmers life Syria's. I had though that a worst for a country can be a war but the article reflects about an important of water and a writer compare the drought between the war, a consequences for Syria's life is worst in booth cases. The water is essential for life however a country at war. We always will reflects about climate change and damage of world.
Scientific American
March 2016, number 3, volume 314
Pages 52-55
Writer John Wendle
Summary
An article was writer by John Wendle. The article count story of Kemal Ali, a farmer of Syria's, He and many farmers migrant to Greek island of Lesbos and other places because a drought was increase and they could not found an agriculture work or any work. The drought was being exacerbated by climate change and bad government policies, has forced than a million farmers Syria's to moved to overcrowded cities. An effects of drought is compare with a disaster of civil war. The war had originated died, fear, refugees, unemployed and famine, the drought too. The article include references about research of damage of climate change.
Personal Opinion
This article is very interesting because explain about a drought and a consequences in a farmers life Syria's. I had though that a worst for a country can be a war but the article reflects about an important of water and a writer compare the drought between the war, a consequences for Syria's life is worst in booth cases. The water is essential for life however a country at war. We always will reflects about climate change and damage of world.
Sunday, October 23, 2016
Tuesday, October 18, 2016
What would make you to buy
something?
Samsung G2 Gears
First of all, the price of this product makes him more accessible. Like I said in the beginning, it cheaper than a cellphone but surprise! It has the same applications; you can call to your family, friends and text with them.
You can hear the music you like just with one touch; you can have a personal trainer in your wrist; take some pictures of beautiful sunset or the amazing party that your friends made for you and at the same time watch the time in your new smart watch.
Second, his incredible size makes him more easy and lightweight to carry on your wrist with 68g of weight. It is more comfortable than a cellphone and his practical design makes him.
Finally you can wear it when you are doing sport, when you are in your job even when you are taking the shower, it is waterproof, and so there is no problem if you put in water.
After all this brief explanation about this amazing product, the real question here is why you would not buy a Samsung gear2?
Organics products for
hair. A new option for your needs.
By Elma Barahona
The organic products for hair actually are excellent option for you and
me. I want to talk about new line of organics products that I am using for my
hair. I invite you to know, do not regret and come with me.
For five years my hair didn`t grew up and the tips was dry, as consequence
a thyroid problems, moreover since some years I have started chemicals
treatments because I have grey hair but
recently decided don`t use this treatments because I want options more healthy.
In that moment, I needed an effective solution and founded it. Two months ago,
my sister Claudia talked me about new organics products for hair, she told me “they
are special for you sister”.
First, is an organic product chemical free. Second, compared with others
organics brands, this one have an excellent price, because these products
regularly are very expensive. Third, it`s available in many organics stores in
the country.
How an organic product offers a healthy option for people who want take
care their selves in harmony with the environment. They are made with natural
flowers, fruits and seeds. There are different scents, my favorite is citric
scent. Definitely this scents is relaxing for me, I enjoy smell it. The product`s presentation are beautiful
because product packaging show an organic concepts, brilliants colors and designs
of the nature. About the type of products, are different based on your needs
and hair problems. In my case, the product is made of oil and I can put in my
hair after to wash it with a shampoo of same line. I left the product until my
hair dry and how is an organic product you can use every day because don`t
damage its.
The price is excellent compared with other commercial brands, how you
know, this type of products are expensive because not use chemicals, are
natural ingredients environmental friendly, because packages can be recycling.
If a person wants take care the place when lived sure will use these type products.
Actually, many people want options healthier as mean must have more
options in the market for this type of buyer. Before organic stores were few
usually located in urban areas. But now with the internet they are virtual
stores, where the consumer can to buy using their credit card. By the
above the available of type of product is guaranteed because there are physical
and virtual stores. Then, if you visit
to virtual stores will have an amazing experience because are carefully
designed for to foster new options for more sophisticated consumer like you and
me.
Finally, I want to remember the organics products of hair are best
options for care your health and environment. Is a wonderful experience to use
it, for three reasons: product quality free ingredients chemicals, excellent
price and availability in physical and virtual stores.
Monday, October 17, 2016
Is better than a tablet
Is better than a tablet
Hello, every one, today I took about the most important thing that man could be
invent, this is very important for the imagination, for the intelligent, the mind
smart or the Thought development is an amazing thing.
Is something very simple, very easy to care, do you used, in the night or day,
not necessary charge for used, you can open when you need, or want, maybe
when you can use this, you travel to the other countries, know about many
cultures, know other way of thinking, is fabulous because you change the topic
every time you want, the size is depend of your need, for a pocket, for a desk, o
for a bag, you can use in many places, without interrupt the other persons , you
can go with this thing in travel, pic nic, or simple to rest in bed o favorite sofa, if
the other person take one this thing, probably can use together, and then, took
about the topic, only is necessary one condition you need know the code for
discovery the amazing thing, but is too easy and the most people of the world
know it, thank this the world can be together and tell another generation
about the most beautiful stories an legends.
Yes, is a Literature Book, let me share for you mi experience, when I started
reading, my mind is fly, this experience is catch me immediately, although
like the movies, watch TV or listen music, sometime need a read a good book, a
Literature Book, to make me forget me reality and carry me an another places,
characters, landscapes, culture and sometimes even feel the emotions of the
book. So when you need remove stress, only buy a good Literature Book and
leave the book catch you, trust me, is amazing experience. If you choose a
good one, not be disappointed never.
My Focal Event
Karol's Focal Event
Everyone have a Focal Event, and is great share it and leard about it, so I invite you to listen my Focal Event and write a comment. Tell me what you think about it!
Everyone have a Focal Event, and is great share it and leard about it, so I invite you to listen my Focal Event and write a comment. Tell me what you think about it!
My Focal Event
Karol's Focal Event
Everyone have a Focal Event, and it's great share it and leard about it, so I invite you to listen my Focal Event and write a comment and tell me what you think about it.
Everyone have a Focal Event, and it's great share it and leard about it, so I invite you to listen my Focal Event and write a comment and tell me what you think about it.
My Focal Event
Karol's Focal Event
Everyone have a Focal Event, and is great share it and leard about it, so I invite you to listen my Focal Event and write a comment. Tell me what you think about it!
Everyone have a Focal Event, and is great share it and leard about it, so I invite you to listen my Focal Event and write a comment. Tell me what you think about it!
Sunday, October 16, 2016
Grammar Check!
Hello everyone!!!
From now on, I require the usage of this amazing tool!! ==> CLICK HERE!!!
Online Grammar Checks will be done on our writing assignments before they are submitted! Let's try GrammarCheck with the Unit 2 writing and edit your previous post with the corrections on our blog!
Take a look into GRAMMARLY as well! It seems to work wonders!
From now on, I require the usage of this amazing tool!! ==> CLICK HERE!!!
Online Grammar Checks will be done on our writing assignments before they are submitted! Let's try GrammarCheck with the Unit 2 writing and edit your previous post with the corrections on our blog!
Take a look into GRAMMARLY as well! It seems to work wonders!
Friday, October 14, 2016
The Perfect Burger
Dear
audience, I will talk about an interesting product that you and your family will
love forever. Maybe you eat many products but this is a new experience. My product
has many different colors like red, green, yellow, brown and white. A regular
shape, it is a circle and the size can vary from small, medium, large or extra
large. The smell and taste are delicious and irresistible !! a combination of
fresh vegetables, meat or chicken, bacon and freshly baked bread. The product
is used to eat lonely, with friends or
family. The product is the perfect food because it is delicious, it has a
comfortable price and you can also select other products like food and
beverages for your pleasure.
The perfect
burger is really delicious because it has a combination of fresh vegetables
like tomatoes, caramelized onions, peppers, green lettuce leaves, avocado,
spinach, mushrooms, pickles and corn.
The vegetables can be combined
depending on your preference. A waiter will ask you what vegetables you like, and what
vegetables you don't. The vegetables are important food but many people
don't like them. The perfect burger has
juicy lamb meat or if you prefer chicken. The meat is always fresh, tender and
well grilled. The chicken comes from responsible and careful farm. The perfect
burger has cheddar cheese and it is a satisfying treat served on a soft toasted bread. You can also
add bacon, pickles, mushrooms or corn. You can prepare your own perfect burger.
The
price is comfortable for a perfect burger; You can compare prices between The
Rumba Burger and other places of burger. you can immediately tell the price for
the full meal is amazing. The full meal
includes fries or waffles, beverages and a big burger, remember you can change the size from small,
medium, large or extra large for a bigger pleasure. The price is around 170 lempiras
or $ 8, so you can invite a girlfriend, husband, friends or family and still pay
only around 700 lempiras or $31. If you
compare this price with other places, you can see that you pay less for the
perfect burger.
At
Rumba Burger you can find other products like nachos, chicken finger, fresh
salad, wings and typical beverages like horchata, lemonade, and sometimes you can have pozol or chicha. Each products to
satisfy each pleasure, for example products I mentioned before offer opportunities for everybody. Children
loves chicken fingers, a grandparents too, women prefer
salad or nachos and in many cases, the man of a family eats burgers but
in Rumba Burger you can try all products. The beverages offered are different from
other places which regularly offer only sodas, but in Rumba Burger you can drink
natural beverages like lemonade, Jamaican juice, pozol or chicha. This last
beverages are typical beverages of Honduras, for preparing them you need to use corn, cinnamon, lemon and sugar. Many
product for many pleasure.
Do you
probe many burger in Honduras, but if you eat delicious, a price accessible and
variety of products you can come this place soon. The Rumba Burger is located
in two different places, first behind City Mall and second place in Boulevard
Morazan. A place are comfortable, nice and modern restaurant not only a place
buy burger. It is important do you value a kind of food for you, friends or
family because Rumba Burger it is not a place fast food, you can waiting 12 or
15 minutes for cooked a grilled burger. It is urgent do you probe a perfect burger and
other products too and you check with all sense an experience eat in this
place.
ByElma Barahona
The organic products for hair actually are
excellent option for you and me. I want to talk about new line of organics products
that I am using for my hair. I invite you to know, do not regret and come with
me.
For five years my hair didn`t grew up and the
tips was dry, as consequence a thyroid problems, moreover since some years I
have started chemicals treatments
because I have grey hair but recently decided don`t use this treatments
because I want options more healthy. In that moment, I needed aneffective
solution and founded it. Two months ago, my sister Claudia talked me about new organics
products forhair, she told me “they are special for you sister”.
First, is an organic product chemicalfree.
Second, compared with others organics brands, this one haveanexcellent price,
because these products regularly are very expensive. Third, it`s available in
many organics stores in the country.
How an organic product offers a healthy option
for people who want take care their selvesin harmony with the environment. They
are made with natural flowers, fruits andseeds. There are different scents, my
favorite is citric scent. Definitely this scents is relaxing for me, I enjoy
smell it. The product`s presentation arebeautiful
because product packaging show an organic concepts, brilliants colors and designs
of the nature. About the type of products, are different based on your needs
and hair problems. In my case, the product is made of oil and I can put in my
hair after to wash it with a shampoo of same line. I left the product until my
hair dry and how is an organic product you can use every day because don`t
damage its.
The price is excellent compared with other commercial
brands, how you know, this type of products are expensive because not use
chemicals, are natural ingredients environmental friendly, because packages can
be recycling. If a person wants take care the place when lived sure will use
these type products.
Actually, many people want options healthier as
mean must have more options in the market for this type of buyer. Before
organic stores were few usually located in urban areas. But now with the
internet they are virtual stores, where the consumer can to buy using their
credit card. By the above the available
of type of product is guaranteed because there are physical and virtual stores.
Then, if you visit to virtual stores will
have an amazing experience because are carefully designed for to foster new
options for more sophisticated consumer like you and me.
Finally, I want to remember the organics products
of hair arebest options for careyour health and environment. Is a wonderful
experience to use it, for three reasons: product quality free ingredients
chemicals, excellent price and availability in physical and virtual stores.
Wednesday, October 12, 2016
Tuesday, October 11, 2016
Comments about Angie's
essay
This essay is very convincing
because She describes achievement with a lot of details the product. I like how
connect the emotions with the product, describing the context and consumer experience.
About the context where the coffee is make, the people who work are very
committed with their work. I think, a
can buy this coffee for taste others brands, mainly for its quality. Elma
In my opinion, a main idea need
more clarity because I do not write about it but it is a good and emotional
description of coffee brand. This essay is convincing because She appeals a
child experience and smell and sensational taste. I feel attracted to this
product because I love coffee and I share an ideas about quality this brand.
Definitely, I will buy this product because She recounts step by step a process
for elaboration of coffee in a Santa Elena finca and She invites an audience to
visit this place. Sonia
Samsung Galaxy S7
Samsung galaxy S7 Throughout history, man has been creating and using different form of communication. technological advances in communication are likely to continue innovate a way of life. My name is Allan Ayala. The goal in this day is speaking about technological advances in communication that it is consider the most important in the world such as the new and innovative Samsung galaxy 7. There different reason because you would buy a Samsung galaxy 7, but the most important is that the new phone is resistant water and dust unlike that other version, have a new hardware and a big battery with that provides greater duration and a load faster.
In the following paragraphs I invite you read a little more Samsung galaxy 7.First the Samsung galaxy S7 is a phone that has the most advance technology in the actuality with very much advanced functions and modern look. It is very much attractive and very easy t use. This spectacular apparatus has a screen QHD AMOIED of 5.1 inches. Also has a camera that you can capture the moment like a professional with dual- pixel technology, offering faster autofocus and low-light sensor. Allowing us take photos of high quality in the night or day become in the most camera in the market with 12 megapixels. Combine that with a big range of accessories special for Samsung galaxy S7 as cases that make a lot more that protect your dispositive. Also Samsung galaxy S7 is made a materials combination of high performance which allowed isolate the internal components leaving ports USB and entries auriculars uncovered. Become it is withstand water, dust splashes, spills and even dusks. Resolve a problem of technological product.Second has a new and advanced software with processor snapdragon 820 or Exynos octa-core with 4 GB RAM memory, 32 GB of internal memory expandable to 64 GB and add a micro SD memory of 250 GB resolve the problem of eliminate picture. You can save approximately 200,000 photos, 130 movies and 50,000 songs. In addition you can surf in internet with 4 GB of speed becoming one of fastest, beautiful and advanced Smartphone. Finally as a common in the Smartphone users the first complaint it that duration of the battery is very little so are need recharge the phone in several occasions during the day but this problem is resolve with a new battery of 3,000 mAH. That allowed extend duration of battery in Smartphone. So the company created a new wireless charger that can use for recharge your phone very quickly.In summary if you want the best technological experience with Smartphone you should buy a new Samsung galaxy S7 available in black onyx and gold platinum.
Welchez Coffee
Hello to everyone, I want to talk about a magnificent product. It is
grown in the mountains and it has a very long process that it’s supervise with
a lot of care and quality, you can trust that you will have only the best in
your table, it is distinguishes for its high quality. It looks like an oval, it's a
brown grain. It has a spectacular smell that calls you to take a cup, when it
is recent done and believe me you cannot refuse to do it. Some people use to
drink it at morning but they have a cup at evening too, actually, the hour is
not important you can drink it at any time. You must buy this product if you
need quality, amazing taste and happiness.
The Welchez coffee its grown in the Finca Santa Isabel, the 375-acre
Café Welchez coffee plantation in the northwest corner of the country, close to
the Guatemalan border. Before the coffee be ready to be at your table, it is
necessary to follow a delicate process from picking up berries to roasting
them. I invite you to go to the Finca Santa Isabel and take a look how they do
it, you would be love to go around in a fantastic place as that. You would be
able to see and feel the passion of the workers to give you the best coffee you
could ever try. The quality of this product is the result of the determination
of the owners to have a happy place where tourist and the community could feel
it as their own home.
Have you ever think in all the process the coffee needs to pass until be
in your table? Well, now that you know, all the process is the reason that
coffee has that amazing, spectacular, awesome taste and smell. I still remember
when I was a Child, I used to wake me up with that incredible aroma of Welchez
coffee around my house and did not have any option than stand up and get a cup
of coffee that boggle my mind.
When I feel without energy and need to be awake by a lot of hours or when
you feel low battery after a long day at work, I just think how much I need a
cup of coffee. At evening, when you are walking by a place near a coffee shop,
you can feel that astonished smell, that you cannot resist, it is like a call
to drink it, and after you do it you feel better, like a new person, then you
can continue working and many ideas come to give you inspiration, as
consequence you will have the best work, despite you will have a lot of
happiness. The best moments sharing with friends are around a cup of coffee
talking about problems, news, dreams and whatever you want, will make you feel
happy.
Finally, I am pretty sure that if you go to the Finca Santa Isabel, you
would be in love of that place. Welchez coffee is one of the best brands that
exist in Honduras and the reason is its quality, you can compare it with any
other. You might go to the supermarket and buy a bag of Welchez coffee to have an incredible
experience surrounded by your best friends and family, surely you will
transport to that place where the coffee is grown with love, passion and
dedication. I invited you to no loss that wonderful experience in a cup of Welchez coffee.
Harpoon
Nowadays, people are trying to find activities that
help to reduce consequences generated by the stress, because this is one factor
of many diseases. According to experts, perform a new activity help to alive
the stress. If you do not have a hobby or want a new, you should try a new
activity you’ve ever been interested. For instance, spearfishing is an activity
that will help your mind to break free your stressors, making it easier for
relaxation. This fishing is to dive into the water and catch fish using a
harpoon or spear gun. To undertake this adventure, you first need to buy the
main tool: The harpoon.
This is an instrument for fishing or hunting aquatic
animals, It has the shape of a gun with a long barrel like a fusil; on the
barrel it carries an iron rod ending in one of its ends with a tip with hooks
that hold the dam after being hunted. Normally the pistol grip is made of
plastic, black color and the body (like a barrel) is made of aluminum to make
it lighter. Some harpoons are made with lightweight materials that enable it to
float in water, therefore their weight can vary between 1 to 3 pounds or more.
It´s body ca be measure around 16 inch more or less, depending what the
customer need. This item look and work like a rifle, but instead of shoot
bullets, shoot the rod.
This is the perfect item you need buy to start this
sport that promises to give you a lot of fun, because it is a cheap, easy to
use and entertaining product.
First of all, although it is an object uncommon, its
price is not high because it does not require the use of sophisticated
technology and you can get from $ 50.00. No need to invest a lot to practice
this activity, so I say that is cheap. Second, its ergonomics allows you to
have easy operation, it fits perfect to the size of the user's hand; also, its
low weight allows better control and precision. For use, it is not required to
have specialized training and you can understand how does it work and use in minutes.
Finally, it is not the most practical way to fish but
one of the most entertaining because in this fishery have to find and catch the
fish with your accuracy and speed. You have to find the strategy or cunning to
approach the fish enough to hunt.
Assignment for October 11th, 2016
Follow the instructions given for today:
1) You will work in pairs. First you need to upload your demostrative essay to the blog along with a picture of your product.
2) Take a look around the blog, comment on other people's posts. Some suggestions on how to reply: leave positive comments, suggestions, ideas on how to improve, specific details to change, etc.
3) Choose one essay from the blog and download it, change the name of the file to your last names.
4) Highlight in one color the main idea and the supportung details in another. Look for the topic sentences and highlight them in another color. Comment on what is the intended audience according to you. Do you believe the writer succesfully captures the intended audience's attention? Why? Why not?
5) Upload to your drive the highlighted version of the essay.
6) write a summary and your opinion (each opinion should be included as a separate paragraph) about the essay you read and once you finish post it as a new publication in the blog. Some aspects to comment: your opinion on main ideas, how convincing is the essay? Do you feel attracted to this product? Would you buy it? Why wouldn't you buy it? Why would you? Etc.
Get to work!
Best,
Leonel
Monday, October 10, 2016
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